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My Father Kept a Dead Room

📅 Published on April 9, 2025

“My Father Kept a Dead Room”

Written by Sebastian Ormond
Edited by Craig Groshek
Thumbnail Art by Craig Groshek
Narrated by N/A

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ESTIMATED READING TIME — 26 minutes

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Part I

The road narrowed as Kevin drove north, the trees arching overhead like clasped fingers, thick enough in places to blot out the afternoon light. With each mile, the canopy grew denser, the asphalt rougher, the shoulder swallowed by the unchecked growth of grass and brush. He hadn’t been out this way in years—not since he was nineteen and angry, too stubborn to come back even when the silence between him and his father stretched on long enough to take root.

He found the farmhouse exactly where memory had left it, crouched low at the end of a gravel drive, its white siding now more gray than anything else. The porch sagged at the center. One of the upstairs windows was boarded over. The chimney was cracked along one side, and the wind teased a loose shingle that clacked faintly as he stepped out of the car.

The lawyer met him there, a man too tan and well-pressed to feel native to the land, holding a thick envelope and a set of tarnished brass keys. The exchange was brief—perfunctory. The will had been straightforward: everything to Kevin. No debts, no remaining family to contest. Just one handwritten addendum in his father’s crooked script, barely legible through the erratic slant and pressure of the pen.

“Don’t open the dead room.”

The lawyer offered no comment on the note, only asked for a signature and handed him the keys. Kevin watched the man’s SUV disappear in the cloud of dust it kicked up behind him, then turned to face the house.

Even before he stepped inside, the air around it felt heavier. Not in any literal sense—no humidity, no looming storm—but with a stillness that didn’t belong in the open country. The woods behind the house stood motionless, branches unmoved despite the breeze that tousled his hair. Somewhere to the left, a crow cried once and then fell silent, as if embarrassed by its own voice.

The screen door groaned under his hand. The main door stuck, just slightly, before opening inward with the quiet protest of long-unstirred hinges. The smell that greeted him was neither wholly unfamiliar nor remotely welcome—an old blend of dust, aged wood, mildew, and something faintly sour. Not rot exactly, but a scent that carried history. Something that had steeped itself into the bones of the structure, long past the point of washing out.

He stepped into the front room, the familiar creak beneath his feet giving way in places to an unexpected softness in the wood. Furniture stood where it had decades before, preserved like a museum of some lesser-known grief. The couch, its floral pattern faded and threadbare, still bore the indents from the bodies of the people who had once made this place a home. The fireplace was blackened from years of use, the iron tools beside it arranged precisely as his father had always insisted. A portrait of his mother hung above the mantel, her smile slightly crooked, as if caught in a moment of uncertainty.

He lingered there, watching her. Trying to remember the sound of her laugh, the way she used to press her palm against his forehead when he had nightmares. She had died when he was twelve. They told him she’d fallen down the stairs. He remembered blood, and the way his father didn’t speak for three days afterward.

Peter Cranston had been a hard man to live with after that. He had never been cruel, exactly, but cold in a way that made cruelty feel like a more honest option. He worked with his hands and spoke little, and when he did speak, it was with a precision that left no room for argument or intimacy. Kevin had learned to avoid questions. He had learned not to ask about the closed doors, the locked shed, or the nights when his father would wake from sleep and stand in the hallway, whispering things too soft to hear.

He didn’t know why he’d accepted the inheritance. Maybe curiosity had bloomed where resentment had begun to wither. Maybe it was guilt. Or maybe, in a life now marked by divorce and debt and the slow, sinking feeling that he’d become a hollow echo of the man he’d once feared becoming, he simply had nowhere else to go.

The hallway to the left of the front room looked just as it had all those years ago—narrow, shadowed, and flanked by closed doors. One bedroom. A bathroom. A linen closet. And at the very end, tucked into an alcove that didn’t quite match the layout of the house, was the door his father had called the dead room.

Even as a child, Kevin had known something was wrong with it. The door had always been locked. Not just latched, but reinforced. It had changed over the years—first a padlock, then a latch bar, and finally, in his later visits before the estrangement, boards nailed directly across the frame. Now it stood as he remembered it last: eight warped planks running across the surface, each secured with a line of heavy iron nails, their heads dulled and rusted.

The wood around the door was warped. Not by water damage or age, but as if pushed outward from within, like the pressure of something massive and unseen had strained against the house’s structure for years and left behind the architectural equivalent of a bruise.

He reached out and touched one of the boards. It was cold. Much colder than the surrounding wall. A breath of air escaped beneath the frame—not enough to feel, but enough to carry with it a scent that didn’t belong anywhere inside a house. Damp earth. Rust. A hint of something sweeter underneath, like the way lilies smelled when left too long in a vase.

Kevin stepped back. The house had gone quiet again.

He returned to the front room, took a seat on the edge of the old couch, and stared at nothing in particular. The envelope containing the will lay on the table beside him, open to the page with his father’s final instruction.

Don’t open the dead room.

The words looked like they had been written with a shaking hand. Maybe they had. Or maybe the shaking had come not from age or illness, but from fear.

He stared down the hall until dusk pressed against the windows, and even then, he didn’t turn on a single light.

Part II

The morning came slowly, through gauzy curtains the color of stale parchment. Kevin had slept on the couch, though “slept” was a generous word for the shallow, uneasy doze that had passed for rest. He woke with the sensation of something having watched him through the night, though there were no open doors, no obvious disturbances, and the house stood in the same perfect, uncanny stillness it had when he’d arrived.

He moved from room to room, opening doors and drawers, pulling back dusty sheets and peering through warped windowpanes. Everything remained where it had been decades ago, each item preserved as though curated by someone trying to simulate the comfort of familiarity without understanding what actually made a place feel like home. The furniture bore the same stains, the same faint scratches—a scar along the surface of the coffee table where he had once dragged a toy car in a moment of disobedience. The couch cushions still dipped toward the center. The bookshelf, still crammed with faded paperbacks and the odd tin of long-expired tobacco, leaned the way it always had, as though refusing correction out of stubbornness rather than neglect.

In the kitchen, he found his mother’s floral dishware stacked neatly beside the sink, a fine crust of dust blunting the once-bright patterns. The refrigerator stood unplugged, the door ajar and empty except for the yellowed husk of a magnet clinging to the inside of the frame. Its once-cheerful message—Don’t forget to smile!—had faded into a ghost of itself.

Returning to the hallway, he paused at the sight of the dead room door, which in daylight looked no less menacing than it had the night before. It sat slightly off-center within the alcove, not just crooked but improperly aligned with the rest of the hallway. The seams of the adjacent walls didn’t match. The baseboards curved in toward it ever so slightly, and the overhead trim dipped where it met the frame, as if the house had warped itself over the years in quiet protest of the room’s presence.

Kevin crouched and ran his hand along the floorboards. The wood shifted subtly beneath his touch, giving the impression that the hallway had once been forced to accommodate the room—like a tree grown around a foreign object, swallowing it slowly but never quite erasing the evidence of intrusion.

He searched the drawers of his father’s old desk, pulling aside rusted pens and unopened mail. In one compartment, hidden beneath a stained manila folder marked with half-legible utility bills, he found a laminated sheet that looked like part of an appraisal report—floor plans drawn in faded blue ink. The living room, kitchen, two bedrooms, and a bathroom were all clearly marked. There was even an outline for the detached tool shed out back. But the dead room wasn’t included. The hallway was rendered as a straight line, unbroken, terminating in what should have been blank wall. No alcove. No door.

Kevin folded the sheet and returned it to the drawer, unease blooming low in his chest. If the room wasn’t part of the original floor plan, then it had been added later. But when? And why would Peter have gone to such lengths to obscure it?

Upstairs, the carpeted landing creaked beneath his steps. Most of the doors were shut, but one stood slightly ajar. He pushed it open and stepped into what had once been his bedroom. The air smelled faintly of dust and old fabric. Light filtered through sheer curtains onto wallpaper he hadn’t seen since childhood—sky blue, dotted with cartoon clouds and birds in flight. His bed still stood in the corner, smaller than he remembered. A toy rocking horse waited in the opposite corner, its red paint chipped at the muzzle, one of the handles broken. He crossed the room and found a cassette player on the shelf, covered in a veil of gray. He blew across its surface, stirring motes into the air, and pressed the power button. Nothing happened. The batteries were long dead.

The shelves were lined with forgotten relics of his youth—paperback mysteries, action figures missing limbs, crayon drawings faded with time. He found one of himself and his mother, stick figures holding hands beneath a bright yellow sun. In the corner, he had written Me + Mom + Home in clumsy, oversized letters. His father was conspicuously absent from the image.

By the time the sun dipped below the treetops, Kevin had explored nearly every inch of the house except for the dead room. He made a small dinner out of the canned goods in the pantry and ate in silence at the kitchen table, listening to the way the wind slipped through the cracked seals of the old windows. As dusk deepened, the shadows stretched longer down the hallway, pooling near the dead room’s base like ink spilled from a shattered bottle.

That night, as he lay on the couch once more, he heard it for the first time.

Tap. Tap. Pause. Tap-tap. Tap.

It came from the hallway, and more specifically, from behind the sealed door. The rhythm was deliberate, too structured to be the casual shifting of the house as it cooled for the night. It continued for nearly two minutes, unbroken, before falling silent again. Kevin held his breath and listened for the creak of floorboards, the rush of movement down the hallway, anything that might suggest the sound had been made by something he could identify and explain. But there was only stillness. Not even the wind stirred the leaves outside.

Sleep came slowly, and when it finally did, it brought with it the shape of his father, seated in the old chair by the hearth.

Peter’s face was drawn and colorless in the dream, his mouth slack as if mid-sentence, though Kevin heard nothing at first. Only the crackle of fire that gave off no warmth, and the distant, hollow sound of dripping water, echoing through what seemed to be the space beneath the floor.

Then, in a voice dry as leaves ground underfoot, Peter leaned forward and whispered:

“It listens. Always has.”

Kevin woke just before dawn, his breath shallow, the house silent again, save for the wind pushing gently against the siding. The dead room waited in the dark behind him, patient and still.

Part III

The next morning brought a rare warmth that filtered through the thinning trees and cast a hazy gold across the yard. Kevin stepped off the porch and began pacing the perimeter of the property, tracing the uneven fence line that had once seemed vast to him in his youth. The tall grasses tugged at his jeans, brushing against his shins like a hundred searching fingers. The sky above was clear, but the stillness that clung to the farmhouse had not lifted. It followed him in subtle ways—the quiet that dulled the sounds of distant birds, the way the shadows beneath the eaves held fast despite the rising sun.

As he passed the edge of the field where the ground dipped toward the old stone well, he saw someone standing near the tree line. At first, he assumed it was another neighbor—someone curious about the property or there to pass along condolences. But as she approached, he recognized her gait, that cautious way of walking over unfamiliar ground even when she’d known it all her life.

“Kevin?” she asked, her voice as brittle as the leaves beneath her shoes.

He stopped walking and turned to face her fully. Her hair was thin and white, her skin pale and splotched with sun damage, and she wore a denim jacket too large for her frame. Though he couldn’t remember the last time he had seen her, something in her expression stirred a memory—of lemonade in a cloudy glass, of a dog barking from a porch across the field, of a voice calling him in for dinner.

“Mrs. Thorne,” he said with a nod. “It’s been a long time.”

“Too long,” she replied, folding her arms across her chest. “You look like your mother. Around the eyes, I mean.”

Kevin offered a tired smile. “That’s what they used to tell me.”

She looked past him toward the house, her gaze lingering on the upstairs windows, then drifting slowly down toward the roofline, where the shingles had begun to curl like old bark.

“I heard about Peter,” she said. “I suppose you’ve come to sort things out.”

He hesitated for a moment, unsure of how much he wanted to explain, but nodded anyway. “He left the house to me. Everything, actually.”

Something in her eyes shifted then—not surprise exactly, but confirmation of something she had already suspected.

“He left you all of it,” she repeated, then added more softly, “Of course he did.”

They stood in silence for a moment, watching the wind move through the high grass. Edna took a few steps closer, her boots crunching against the gravel near the edge of the path.

“I remember your mother,” she said. “She was good to me. Always made too much food and sent you over with Tupperware full of it. She used to hum while she hung laundry out back—some old tune, something soft and low like it was meant only for her. You’d run through the sheets, laughing.”

Kevin’s throat tightened unexpectedly. He remembered that, too—the way the white linens would balloon in the wind, the smell of detergent warmed by the sun, the sound of his mother’s voice just barely audible through the fabric.

“She was kind,” he said. “Patient.”

“She was more than that,” Edna said, her voice taking on a firmer edge. “She was alive. That house, it changed after she passed.”

Her eyes returned to the house, and this time she squinted slightly, as if trying to see through the walls themselves.

“He left you the house,” she said again, this time more as a statement than a question. “Tell me something—did he say anything about the room?”

Kevin stiffened slightly, unsure of how to respond. He didn’t need to ask which room she meant.

“He left a note,” he admitted. “Just a few words. He said not to open it.”

Edna made a sound deep in her throat, something between a sigh and a grunt of disapproval.

“I figured as much,” she muttered. “He was always too proud to admit when something was bigger than him. But he knew. In the end, I think he knew he couldn’t keep it out forever.”

“What is it?” Kevin asked, his voice lower now, more cautious. “That room… it’s not on the floor plan. I don’t even think it’s supposed to be part of the house.”

She turned and looked at him then, eyes clear and unflinching.

“It’s never been part of the house,” she said. “Not really. It was always there, even before your father bought the place. I remember it from when I was a girl—back when the old Crawfords lived here. Before them, it belonged to a man named Eli Garner. Folks said he dug the well too deep and let something in. That was the kind of story people told to scare kids. But that room…” She shook her head. “That room was already there. Nobody built it. It just was.

Kevin tried to reconcile that with the warped hallway, the misaligned woodwork, the absent blueprints. He wanted to argue, to push back against what she was saying, but he couldn’t find a foundation strong enough to stand on.

“Did you ever go inside?” he asked.

Edna hesitated. Then, with visible discomfort, she shook her head.

“No,” she said. “Not once. But your father did.”

“When?”

“After your mother died. He locked himself in there one night. I remember because the power went out all across the ridge, and I saw his lantern flickering through the side window until almost morning. When he came out, he didn’t speak to anyone for weeks.”

She drew her jacket tighter around herself and took a step back toward the woods.

“He was different after that. Not just quiet—off. Something behind the eyes. Like he was carrying more than just grief. The animals started dying soon after. Strays at first. Then our barn cat went missing. Then a goat. No signs of struggle. No blood. Just gone.”

She paused.

“I used to think he was just grieving. But now?” She looked back toward the house. “Now I think he let it out. Or maybe just let it see him.”

Kevin’s skin prickled in the morning light. The house, behind him, loomed with the same subtle pressure it always had, its presence undeniable, though nothing visible had changed.

Edna gave him a final glance and said, “If you’re smart, you’ll pack up what matters and leave the rest behind. That house isn’t yours. Not really. It’s just waiting for the next name to carve into its bones.”

Then she turned and walked away, her figure swallowed by the tall grass and the treeline beyond.

Kevin stood alone again, the sun now climbing higher, though the warmth had faded from the air.

Part IV

It began with the moths.

Kevin noticed them late in the afternoon as he passed through the hallway, a mug of lukewarm instant coffee in one hand, his other trailing lightly along the discolored wallpaper. The house had been quiet most of the day, save for the groan of its bones settling in the changing temperature. He had taken to talking aloud just to hear a voice fill the space, even if it was only his own.

That afternoon, however, the stillness had seemed different. Expectant.

He paused in front of the dead room door. The smell that issued from beneath the threshold had grown stronger, a mix of mineral dampness and something faintly organic, like the wet insides of a log rotting from the center out. He crouched to inspect it, unsure what had drawn his attention until he saw the thin, wavering line that framed the bottom of the door.

Moths.

They lay in a perfect row, their wings curled and powdered, their legs folded delicately beneath them. Perhaps two dozen in all. None moved. None bore signs of injury. Kevin counted them twice before standing and backing away. A quick survey of the hallway’s baseboards revealed no others. Only those, placed with uncanny precision, as if arranged by hand.

He said nothing that night. He didn’t mention them aloud, not even to himself. When he passed the hallway again after dinner, he averted his gaze entirely.

By morning, they were gone.

Not merely disturbed or scattered, but gone. No husks. No wings. No powder smudges. Not even a trace of their fragile corpses clinging to the edges of the threshold. The air around the door, however, had grown colder. When he pressed his hand to the wall beside it, the chill sank into his knuckles like the touch of icewater.

Something shifted in Kevin after that. He told himself it was irrational—just the product of stress, of being alone in a place burdened with too much memory and too little clarity—but the sensation of being watched began to take on a texture. It was no longer ambient. It had direction. It had focus.

He resolved to remove the boards.

There was no grand moment of defiance or epiphany. No dramatic swell of resolve. Only a quiet morning, the distant call of a hawk overhead, and the feeling that waiting any longer would serve no purpose but to invite more silence into a place already overrun with it. He retrieved the toolbox from the shed behind the house, brushing off cobwebs and mildew to uncover a pry bar and claw hammer, both rusted but serviceable. With the tools in hand, he returned to the hallway and stood before the door for nearly five full minutes, listening. The house gave no protest.

The first nail came free with effort, shrieking slightly as the rusted head gave way beneath the hammer’s bite. Kevin worked it free, felt the resistance in the wood, and leaned into it with a pressure born not of confidence, but of exhaustion. He had removed two more when the light overhead flickered—not once, but three times in rapid succession—and then stabilized.

That was enough. For now.

He stowed the tools in the front closet and told himself he would resume the task later. A few hours of distance might lend him the perspective to proceed with a clearer head.

But when he returned the following morning, the tools were gone.

He searched the closet twice. Then the kitchen. Then the back porch. The shed. The crawlspace beneath the stairs. Every place he could imagine having left them. They had vanished as completely as the moths.

The house began to shift after that, in subtle ways that eluded clear articulation. At first, it was the arrangement of objects. A chair he didn’t remember moving turned slightly toward the window. A tea towel that had been folded across the oven handle now left crumpled in the sink. A spoon resting on the counter where he was certain he hadn’t used one.

Then came the photographs.

Kevin woke one morning to find that every framed picture in the house—every childhood snapshot, every wedding photo, every fading print of him and his mother smiling in the sun—had been turned backward. Each frame still rested exactly where it had been, but their backs now faced the room, as though the images inside had decided, of their own accord, that they no longer wished to be seen.

He returned them to their proper orientation, but the message had settled somewhere deep in his ribs, heavy and unwelcome.

The next incident involved the tapes.

There were dozens of them in his old bedroom—cassettes from childhood, most unlabeled or scrawled with vague identifiers like “Road Trip” or “Xmas 89.” Out of habit more than intent, Kevin popped one into the player and sat cross-legged on the carpet, expecting to hear old songs or the echo of his parents’ voices narrating some long-ago moment.

What he heard instead was a conversation.

It wasn’t familiar. It wasn’t even clear.

A man and a woman, voices muffled and strained through a thin veil of static, arguing in a language he couldn’t identify. It wasn’t foreign in the usual sense—it had the cadence of something half-remembered, the tonal pull of a lullaby spoken through clenched teeth.

The tape ended abruptly with a high-pitched whine. When he rewound it and pressed play again, there was only silence.

That night, Kevin descended into the basement.

The stairs groaned with each step, and the bare bulb at the base of the stairs swayed slightly in the draft that moved along the concrete floor. The space beneath the house had always unnerved him as a child, though he had rarely been allowed down there. Peter had kept it locked, or claimed the floor was unsafe. But now the padlock was broken, and the basement stood open.

He explored slowly, stepping over discarded paint cans and broken shelves. In the far corner, he found a wooden crate beneath a tarp. Inside, amid rotting books and corroded tools, he found a single sheet of paper torn from a spiral notebook.

The handwriting was not Peter’s.

It read: “The dead aren’t quiet. They only wait.”

He pocketed the page and climbed the stairs.

That night’s dream was different.

His mother sat at the kitchen table, her hands folded before her, a faint smile on her lips. The room was painted in deep sepia tones, as though filtered through memory, and the air around her shimmered faintly, like heat rising from asphalt.

“You were supposed to be mine,” she said.

Her voice was calm, but it echoed unnaturally, rebounding off the walls with a distortion that made it seem as though others were speaking the words in perfect unison.

“You were supposed to be mine,” she repeated. “Not his. Not theirs.”

Kevin tried to move, but his limbs felt submerged in syrup, slow and unresponsive.

“You can still be,” she said.

Then he woke, gasping, and sat upright on the couch.

His hands were dirty. Soil clung to his fingernails, and the scent of loam rose from his skin as he looked down at his palms. Something sharp pricked the ball of his left hand. He turned it over and saw a splinter lodged deep beneath the skin—old wood, dark and slick with something he didn’t recognize.

The hallway behind him yawned in silence, the door to the dead room still sealed.

But the house felt closer now.

Part V

The walls were soft to the touch. Not the kind of softness that came from age or disrepair, but a pliable give beneath the plaster, as if something inside had swollen outward and was pushing gently against the surface, testing for weakness.

Kevin stood in the second-floor hallway, fingers hovering just above a water-stained seam where the wallpaper had begun to peel. The edges curled like dead leaves, revealing the flaking yellow glue beneath. He ran his thumb along the torn flap and pulled slowly, peeling it downward in a long, ragged strip that exposed the wall underneath.

What he found there stopped him cold.

Drawn in what appeared to be charcoal or scorched wood were dozens of rough symbols. Some looked like eyes. Others like pits. Concentric circles spiraled outward from jagged centers, each ring irregular, as if the hand that drew them had trembled with more than mere age. Stick figures dotted the spaces between—some with arms upraised in supplication, others bent backward, limbs contorted unnaturally. None had heads. Where the heads should have been, there were only black smudges or dark, vertical slashes.

He tore more paper away and uncovered a figure larger than the rest, a crude silhouette composed entirely of interlocked rings. It seemed to stretch and shift as he stared at it, the lines subtly overlapping in ways that defied sense. In its chest, a gaping circle had been etched deeper than the rest, cutting into the plaster itself.

Kevin stepped back. For a moment, the hallway seemed narrower, as if the walls had inched inward while he wasn’t looking.

In the study downstairs, he searched for context—anything that might explain what he’d found. Peter had never been one to keep journals or personal correspondence; at least, not that Kevin had ever seen. But behind a row of tax records and expired insurance forms, tucked beneath a stack of National Geographics from the early seventies, he found a small black book with a cracked leather spine.

No title. No author. Just dust and the unmistakable stink of mildew.

The first dozen pages were empty, but then the handwriting began. Tight, angular script. Peter’s.

It breathes when I’m near it.

I don’t sleep in the west bedroom anymore. I hear the pulse too clearly there.

The mouths aren’t real. But they move. I’ve seen them move.

Some entries read like confessions. Others more like incantations. Kevin flipped through dozens of pages, most rambling and incoherent, full of crossed-out lines and scrawled margins. But a few stood out with jarring clarity.

It wasn’t the fall that took her. It was the house.

And another:

The thing in the room wasn’t always in the room. It was beneath it first. The wood just learned how to hold it.

Kevin closed the book slowly, feeling the brittle pages shift beneath his fingers.

He sat for a long time after that, staring out the living room window as the light drained from the sky. The memory came unbidden—his mother’s scream, a single sharp note that had sliced through the house like a needle, followed by silence. He remembered rushing to the stairs and seeing his father kneeling beside her crumpled body. There had been no visible wound, no blood that he could see, but something in the way Peter had looked up at him—hollow-eyed and wild—had etched itself permanently into his mind.

They had told him she slipped. That it had been sudden. Tragic. An accident.

But that memory, now paired with Peter’s journal and the strange symbols hidden behind the wallpaper, unraveled in his mind.

Later, in the crawlspace behind the kitchen, Kevin knelt with a flashlight in hand. The air was thick with dust and insulation fibers, and the beam of the light cut through it in slow, meandering swirls. He moved aside an old storage crate, then a rolled-up carpet, revealing a shallow depression in the packed earth. Something pale protruded from the dirt.

He brushed it clean with his hand and uncovered a ribcage—small and narrow, too slender for a dog, too long for a cat. The skeleton was intact but bent at an impossible angle, as though crushed from the inside. The bones gleamed faintly, not with the dry chalkiness of something long dead, but with a slick sheen that spoke of wetness. Of recentness.

He scrambled out of the crawlspace and shut the panel behind him, but the cold that had risen in his spine did not fade.

That night, just after sunset, a knock came at the door.

He opened it to find Edna standing on the porch, her expression drawn and her lips pressed into a thin, pale line.

“I saw your light was on,” she said. “I need to talk to you.”

Kevin stepped aside and let her in. She didn’t remove her coat. She didn’t sit. She remained standing just inside the doorway, eyes flicking over the room as though searching for something invisible but close.

“You’ve been poking around, haven’t you?” she said. “I told you not to.”

“I haven’t opened it,” Kevin replied. “The door’s still sealed.”

“That doesn’t mean it hasn’t noticed,” Edna said. “It always notices.”

He tried to keep his voice even. “What is it?”

She shook her head, her gaze growing distant.

“It’s not something you can name. Not properly. It’s not a ghost. It’s not a demon. It’s more like…” She struggled for a word, then settled on, “A memory with too much weight behind it. A thought that learned how to grow teeth.”

She moved closer, lowering her voice.

“If you break the seal, it won’t be you who pays. That’s how it works. It doesn’t take the one who opens the door. It takes what matters to them. It’s worse that way. It knows.”

Kevin’s mouth felt dry. “Why tell me this now?”

“Because I think it’s already loose enough to look,” she said. “And I think it remembers you.”

She turned without another word and walked back into the darkness, her form vanishing at the edge of the porch light.

That night, Kevin stood in the hallway long past midnight. The boards over the dead room door were still in place, though he had begun to notice hairline gaps between them where the wood bowed outward slightly, straining at the nails.

When he turned to head back to the living room, he saw a figure at the far end of the hallway.

Peter stood there, or something that wore his shape. He was clothed the way Kevin remembered him from childhood—denim shirt, canvas work pants, boots dulled with age. But the posture was wrong. Too stiff. Too straight. The shoulders pulled back as if mounted on strings.

And the face—God, the face. The eyes were too wide, the smile too broad, a fixed expression that never shifted, not even as Kevin stepped backward in shock. The figure did not speak. It did not blink.

When Kevin dared to look again, it was gone.

By morning, the dread had calcified in his chest. He walked the property to clear his head and found a neighbor’s dog lying near the fenceline.

The body was intact except for the abdomen, which had been split open with surgical precision. The interior was hollow.

The house watched him from the hilltop, its windows blank and sightless.

And behind its walls, something waited.

Part VI

Kevin waited until nightfall. Not out of strategy or ritual, but because the decision, once made, brought with it a heaviness that delayed motion. He spent the final daylight hours pacing the house, lingering by windows, occasionally touching the doorframe of the dead room with the edge of his fingers. When the sun finally disappeared beyond the tree line and the shadows deepened into full, unbroken dark, he retrieved the hammer from beneath the sink—one he had found tucked behind a leaky pipe, hidden perhaps by Peter or the house itself—and returned to the hallway.

The boards over the door remained in place, though more of them had begun to bow outward, nails protesting quietly in their sockets. Kevin positioned himself in front of the door and, with careful pressure, drove the claw of the hammer beneath the first rusted head. It resisted. Then, with a shriek, it gave way.

The sound echoed down the hallway, sharp and metallic, unnatural in the silence. He removed the first board and dropped it to the floor. Then the second. And the third. Each one seemed more reluctant than the last, as if torn from flesh rather than wood. When the final plank clattered against the floorboards, Kevin stepped back and studied the bare door beneath. It was older than he remembered—older than the rest of the house, even. The grain was blackened in places, not with rot or age, but as if scorched from the inside out.

He gripped the knob and turned.

The door swung inward with a reluctant groan, revealing nothing beyond.

It was a void that swallowed the hallway’s meager light, a pitch so complete that the frame might have opened onto another dimension altogether. Kevin raised his flashlight, a broad-beamed LED, and swept it across the threshold. The beam disappeared less than two feet in, devoured by the black. There were no windows. No corners. No obvious floor. The walls were lost in the depth.

He stepped inside.

The floor was solid beneath his feet, but unnaturally cold. The temperature dropped with startling speed, sinking through his shoes and into his bones. His breath fogged faintly in front of him. The smell—stronger now—was something like wet bark mixed with the coppery tang of rusted iron. He moved forward, slowly, keeping the beam of the flashlight pointed straight ahead.

Behind him, the door closed without sound.

Kevin didn’t turn around. He kept walking.

Though the room was not large—certainly no more than twelve feet wide when measured from the outside—it seemed to stretch endlessly inward. His footsteps made no echo. The light illuminated only what stood directly in front of him, which remained uniform and unchanging: blank walls, smooth floor, ceiling just out of reach. No furniture. No fixtures.

Then, somewhere deep within the structure—behind the walls or beneath them—came the first scrape.

It wasn’t loud, but it was sharp, like a wire drawn slowly across wood. It lasted no more than a few seconds, followed by silence. Then another scrape. Then another. The rhythm didn’t repeat itself. It lacked pattern and direction. It suggested movement but not origin.

Kevin slowed his steps. He felt as though he had been walking for much longer than the room should have allowed. When he finally stopped, he turned in a slow circle and raised the flashlight toward the back wall—if it could be called that.

The beam landed on something that looked painted, but with a material too thick and textured to be pigment. The mural stretched from floor to ceiling, covering the entirety of the surface. At first, he thought it depicted a tree—its roots twisting down, its branches coiling upward—but upon closer inspection, the shapes resolved into something far less natural.

Bodies. Hundreds of them. Not drawn in full detail, but implied through lines, curves, and segments. Some were featureless. Others wore faces half-formed, their mouths stretched open in what might have been song or scream. Arms stretched upward like vines. Legs spiraled into each other until they were indistinguishable from roots. Toward the center of the mural, the figures dissolved entirely into a mass of filaments—veins, nerves, worms—drawn together in a massive circular knot.

Kevin stepped closer. The surface was uneven. The paint—or whatever had been used—shone faintly under the light, giving the impression of something still alive.

Then, without so much as a flicker or warning, the flashlight died.

Kevin stood in the dark, the void closing in around him like water flooding a room. The cold deepened, wrapping around his chest, pushing at his shoulders. He felt the air grow taut, as though something massive had stirred just out of reach.

And then, from behind him—or perhaps from within him—came the voices.

They whispered, layered and low, and Kevin could not distinguish whether they were speaking to him or through him. He heard his name once. Then his father’s. Then something else entirely, a language composed of vowel sounds and wet syllables that crawled across his skin.

He staggered backward and pressed his hand to the mural behind him. It pulsed.

There was no longer any sense of direction. He turned once, twice, unsure which way he had come. The room offered no guidance.

And then the dream began.

He was in the kitchen again. But not as he remembered it. Everything was covered in a yellowing haze, as though left too long in the sun. The cabinets were warped. The windows dripped with condensation. His father sat at the table, hunched and still, staring into the middle distance.

Kevin tried to speak, but no sound came out.

Peter turned slowly.

“It was in her first,” he said. “Then me.”

His eyes were empty. Not blind—empty. As though scooped out.

“It has your eyes now.”

Kevin woke with a start.

He was lying on the floor of the hallway, the door to the dead room shut tight behind him. The boards still lay in a heap to the side. His hands ached. His breath came slow and shallow. He looked down and saw black streaks on his palms, the same oily residue that had coated the mural.

Somewhere deep within the house, the scraping sound resumed.

Part VI

No one saw Kevin Cranston leave the house.

The truck remained parked in the same spot, half-obscured by tall grass and flaking birch saplings. The mailbox remained empty for weeks. No lights were seen inside the home after the evening of the storm, when several neighbors claimed the lightning had struck somewhere close—perhaps the old well, or the iron weather vane that had long since rusted itself to stillness. There had been no sound of an engine, no trail of footprints along the muddy drive, and no sign of struggle. The front door was locked when the sheriff arrived, and the windows remained unbroken. Only the faint odor of something off lingered around the frame of the structure.

Deputies who entered the home found it undisturbed. The furniture stood exactly as it had been for decades. The air was stale. A blanket lay across the back of the couch, slightly rumpled, as if someone had slept there. A cup, half-filled with water, sat on the edge of the kitchen counter. Upstairs, the bedrooms were empty and undisturbed, save for a single cassette tape left unspooled on the carpet, the magnetic strip tangled in the carpet fibers.

In the hallway, they found the door.

It had been resealed.

Not hastily, and not with the tools that Kevin had last used. The planks across the dead room door were darker now, as though aged overnight. The nails that held them in place were long and oxidized, their heads blackened and irregular, buried deep into the wood as though driven by something stronger than hand or hammer. The boards themselves were warped and splintered at the edges, and the doorframe bore faint impressions where the wall appeared to have bowed inward, drawn toward the doorway as if by gravity or thirst.

The deputies logged it all in the report.

Subject missing. Residence abandoned. No signs of forced entry or departure. Door sealed from unknown source. Investigation closed pending further developments.

Edna Thorne passed the house three days later. She didn’t slow her steps as she neared the edge of the Cranston property, but she glanced toward the upper window—the one with the cracked pane and the warped frame—and saw a figure watching her from behind the glass.

It did not move or draw the curtain aside or make any gesture of greeting or warning. But it stood there, unmistakably still, with its shoulders slightly slouched and its head cocked just enough to suggest it had only recently remembered how to mimic the way a person stands.

She did not look again.

Instead, she kept walking, her feet unsteady on the gravel path as she passed the tree line and continued down the road toward her home. She said nothing of it to the neighbors. Not even to her niece, who came to stay with her on weekends and who, one morning, found Edna sitting silently on the porch with her tea gone cold, her eyes fixed on something far away that only she could see.

* * * * * *

Six months later, the house sold to a man named Robert Flannigan, who had recently retired from a logistics firm in Columbus and dreamed of restoring an old home in the country. He arrived in early April with a moving truck and a blue tarp covering mismatched antique furniture strapped down with nylon cords. He brought a toolbox, a camping cot, a battery-powered radio, and an eagerness sharpened by ignorance.

He unlocked the front door, stepped inside, and was immediately struck by the way the house seemed to lean. Not physically, but perceptually—an almost imperceptible dip in perspective, as if the walls were listening. He paused briefly in the threshold, uncertain, then shook it off and began unloading.

By the second day, he had decided the upstairs would require more work than he’d anticipated. The wallpaper peeled in great curling sheets, the carpet felt damp despite the absence of water damage, and the ceiling in the west bedroom gave off a soft creak when walked beneath. The downstairs, however, remained solid. He told himself the house had good bones.

On the third morning, while retrieving his gloves from the mailbox, he found a single envelope resting inside. It had no stamp. No return address. Just a folded piece of paper within, written in a sharp, shaking hand.

Don’t open the dead room.

He read it three times. Then, uncertain whether the note was a prank or an old joke passed between locals, he crumpled the page and tossed it into the trash bin beside the kitchen sink.

That night, after dinner, he noticed the hallway felt colder than the rest of the house. He attributed it to the structure’s age and went to bed early, determined to begin stripping the cabinets the following morning.

The house stood still beneath the rising moon, quiet and compliant, its windows dark, its eaves whispering faintly with the shifting breeze.

And in the hallway, beneath the boards and behind the sealed door, something moved.

The planks bowed inward ever so slightly, creaking not from pressure but from breath. The door pulsed against its frame with slow, rhythmic motion—an inhalation, a hesitation, and then a soft exhale into the space between walls.

As if it dreamed of something new.

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